| Good choice in skipping the Z logo. Your painting is stronger than most of what passes for Z-art on this site. the color and contrast are nice. The weakness is its composition with the car fairly centered and too much black surrounding it. The trick I have used was to divide the canvass into quarters. Each fourth should be able to stand on its own from a composition standpoint. Good effort, keep it up.

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